How can i make this make more sense? Is it already good enough? (Highlighted sentence)

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Below are some details from the transcript "American Indian Boarding Schools Haunt Many." :
"Wright says matrons bathed him in kerosene and shaved his head."

"Students at federal boarding schools were forbidden to express their culture - everything from wearing long hair to speaking a single Indian word."

In the space below, write 1-2 more details from the transcript that are similar to, or in the same category, as these details.

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Read the passage below. And it is strange that we men, to whom this very vegetation had seemed so weird and horrible a little time ago, should now behold it with the emotion a home-coming exile might feel at sight of his native land. What is the author’s purpose in using a metaphor in the description above? The author is conveying the relief that the men feel at having escaped. The author is presenting the similarities between the natural landscape on earth and that on the moon. The author is portraying the transformation that the men have undergone as they learn to appreciate the moon’s beauty. The author is depicting the men’s return to earth after they have lived with the Selenites.

What inference can be made about the Constitution?

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Natalie loved to travel and explore new places and cultures.

This scenario is an example of (Indirect, or direct) characterization.

How do I hide apps in my MacBook on the tool bar?

Rebounding is the art of anticipating, of always being prepared to grab it. But you can’t drop the ball.


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How does Mark Kurlansky introduce his idea of fish depletion in the first few pages of World Without Fish?

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Part A: List 3 traits that Leiningen has that indicate that he is competitive. Explain why.

Throughout Act 2 it is implied that Eliza values herself and has self-respect. All of the following provides evidence for that conclusion except...

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What is the tone of this story.

Read this excerpt from "A Student's Guide to Global Climate Change."

Climate change will lead to more hot days and more heat waves. As a result, people will need to use more air conditioning to stay cool. As people use more air conditioning, electricity shortages and blackouts could increase. Because most electricity is currently produced by burning fossil fuels, using more electricity to run air conditioners will also add more greenhouse gases to the atmosphere.

What problem does the excerpt present?

There will be more hot days and heat waves in the future.
People will need air conditioning more often in the future.
Power shortages and blackouts may increase.
Greenhouse gases are being added to the environment.

Question 5 (3 points)
Animal Cell
Which terms correctly identify the indicated structures in this sketch of a cell viewed under a microscope?
Question 5 options:
Nucleus

Endoplasmic Reticulum

Lysosome

Golgi Apparatus

Ribosome

Mitochondrion

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Write a rhyming quatrain.

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Rewrite paragraph 3 of the text “Dreaming Big, Three Friends Help Each Other to Succeed” using literary devices. Include at least 2 literary devices such as simile, metaphor, hyperbole, idiom, personification, alliteration, imagery, descriptive/sensory detail, or dialogue.

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How does the setting affect the characterization in "The Goldfish Boy"?

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What is the structure of this text?


Why does the author choose to title the sections this way? What effect does this have on the reader's understanding of the topic?


What would be a good alternate heading for the section of the text titled, “The Balance of Nature”

The word reformation literally means a change for the better. Before you read, think about this question: Is it harder for people to change their surroundings or to change who they are inside? What things could motivate a person to make a change for the better? Write a response to this question in your journal, and explain your reasons. After you’ve finished, read “A Retrieved Reformation.”

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What is the misplaced modifier in this sentence?
1) Famous for centuries, we are studying Milton in literature class.
A. studying C. we are studying Milton in literature
B. Famous for centuries D. in literature class

2) After losing his sight, Milton’s third wife and daughters recorded his verses.
A. After losing his sight C. Milton’s third wife and daughters recorded
B. his sight D. his verses

Rewrite the following fragment to make it a complete sentence.

Fragment: At the drive-in on Friday nights during the summer.

What does the suffix -ism mean?

a. characteristic of

b. become